Soul of the Phantom

Thanks for the reviews Elitehusky and Memento Mori! Interesting enough, I have never heard of Daniel Defoe's Robinson Crusoe before. :P And thanks Memento Mori for sniffing out those errors! ...

Thanks for the review Kraemer! And thanks for bring those to my attention, I didn't see those coming.

Thanks for the review! And I didn't notice that, thanks!

Thanks for the help with grammer and spelling issues Rubric. And are cliches always bad things to use? No offence taken, I play video games (See Siguature and Avatar.) so ...

Thanks for the review Nightsdreamer! Part II is up.

I try to leave it up to the reader to deicde what it was about. But I saw it a a struggle between the inhuman and human, companies operte inhumanianly ...

Thanks for the review! Part II will probebly be out tomorrow, but I will make sure to keep in mind what I need to work on. Here's to perhaps a ...

Thanks bluecows, I like most people love action, but this story was not about action persay.

Wow, this is an old story. Oh did you dig this up lol? Thanks for your comments though. Also check out my other story, A Voyage to Power Its a ...

Good start so far. I am not the best example for grammer and spelling, but I see nothing here right now to address. Looking forward to more.

Thanks for the review Phorcys! I appreciate this review, since informs me of stuff I overloaded on :P. As we speak I am rewriting this chapter to better fit what ...

I liked it. But I wondering why no one notice that the guard(s) died. Most castles have more then two guard's protecting it. Also why did this character killed the ...

Thanks lol. Good I could be of some help.